Tuesday, May 31, 2011

Revolution Cafe (Misson District of San Francisco and West Oakland)

Mission District location







1) The Revolution Café is a hip spot to go to in two of the most hip districts in the Bay area. The one in San Francisco sits on one of the main streets of the Mission District attracting all interested in listening to free music and relaxing for drinks. The one in West Oakland offers the same as it attracts an eclectic group of young adults who just want to hang out and meet other cool people, including the occasional roaming crackhead or alcoholic. People might assume that a hip place would attract the same type of hip person, but as one who has experienced the conflicting dynamics of the groups who occupy these spaces I feel it would make an interesting scripted space. Oakland Location

2) Both the Mission District of San Francisco and West Oakland are landscapes of the Bay area up until recent which inhabited for the most part underprivileged and low income minorities. Recently, however these areas have been undergoing gendrification because of the growing amount of middle and upper class young adults moving to the area because its seen as a, “hip” place. Both the Mission District of San Francisco and West Oakland contain several spots attracting people with coffee and free music. They are many different perspectives about this space and I can only speak of a few based off of my experiences from this past Memorial Day weekend. There is the perspective of flanuer who passes through spaces, such as the Revolution café, just to say that they payed a visit. There are the people who try extremely hard to be cool and overcompensate with outdated lingo. Then there are the groups who feel they are being invaded by the previously mentioned. These people can’t go a few sentences without bringing up some racial, social, or environmental issue. Naturally these people tend to clash with the, “invaders,” because a lot of the activist believe that these people are unauthentic. While the, “invaders,” walk around interacting with the space in which they feel makes them seem more hip of a person the activist who are mostly minority from what I’ve observed often talk behind their back poking fun at their demeanor. The funny thing about the whole situation is that most of these activist who despise the middle and upper class invasion aren’t even from the Bay area, but somehow feel they have more credibility simply because they come from an ethnic background even if they too grew up middle or upper class. Then there’s the perspective of the cities inhabitants who have been living there before gendrification took place who from what I observed don’t even care or notice it as a problem. This space, specifically the Revolution Café in either Oakland or San Francisco would be an interesting place to ensue on scripted space. There’s also a lot of roaming crackheads and alcoholics.

3) A) Because Revolution Café often host musical artist it would be interesting if a scripted character went up to a perform a song that spoke out against gendrification. None but one other “onlookers,” would be aware of the performance. Even the café worker who introduced the band wouldn’t be aware of the performance. It would start with the performer strumming the guitar fueling the audience with anticipation for about a minute. Then he/she would begin singing a song that begins, “You guys…we are being gendrified.” It’s also important to note that this performer would be Caucasian seeing as how Caucasians are according to the activist the reason why gendrification is taking place. There would be another person in the audience who would start singing along. This person would be a minority who inclusion would hopefully confuse the unsuspecting observers prompting one of them to speak out about the issue by either proving its worth or highlighting its stupidity.

B) Another narrative that would occur within this scripted space would probably take place between a crackhead and an alcoholic. Basing it off of my experiences from this weekend it would be begin with the alcoholic talking to the people enjoying the ambiance of the café. The people would laugh at the alcoholic senseless banter, just as my friends and I did this weekend, then the alcoholic would come up and tell him that we weren’t laughing with him but rather at him. Suddenly the performance would lose all hilarity as the crackhead tries to convince the alcoholic to leave the people alone. Just as my experience last Saturday in Oakland, the crackead would slowly begin letting out stories of childhood and growing up with the alcoholic. The transformation from innocence to addict would be a difficult yet informative narrative to consume.

C) One last narrative that might occur in the Revolution café would be an argument between an activist and one of the, “invaders.” To my knowledge the activist only talks about the, “invader,” behind their back but in this instance the activist comes out and publicly proclaims how they feel about the, “invader,” for all to hear. I’m interested to hear if any of the other activist would join in or if any of the, “invaders,” would understand what’s going on, because too my knowledge the claims made by the activist is usually only spoken amongst themselves to claim authenticity of cool over the, “invaders.” If no one speaks out then it is proven that the entire argument lacks passion and is therefore senseless if people do speak out then the opposite is proven.

Monday, May 23, 2011

Script #3 Treatment

Jacob is a twenty-five year old Internet geek who spends most of his time trolling threads and constantly looking for updates on when the next Lonely Girl 15 video is to be posted. Over the past few months Jacob feels he has built a relationship with Lonely Girl 15. Despite the fact that he too is an avid troller, he makes sure to report every trolling post. In addition to his vocal replies to her every action in her videos he leaves long heartfelt messages after each episode is over and is sure that Lonely Girl 15, though she has never replied to any of his post, has read them. Jacob even misconstrues some of Lonely Girl 15’s videos as video replies to his commentary. When Lonely Girl 15 post a video titled, “Proving Science Wrong,” many comment wondering if that is her boyfriend. Jacob replies to one comment in particular assuring the public that the he is not her boyfriend. The next video post made by Lonely Girl 15 is in regards to these comments posted by other viewers. Jacob believes that his video comment prompted her to create this video and understands this to mean that she has been reading her comments. Even though she has yet to reply to his post specifically this incident makes Joseph fall in love with her even more. He goes on with this for a few months. Jacob is heavily disappointed when he checks into her Youtube channel and sees that there is no repost. When she has added a new video Jacob drops everything he was doing, which in this instance is put his game of World of Warcraft on hold, to devout his full attention to his self-assumed girlfriend. Jacob grows more and more delusion. He tells his friends of their “relationship.” Most of his friends poke fun of his delusion. One of his friends, Skylar, post an article about how Lonely Girl 15 might be a fake while another friend Matthew, admits that he is in love with Lonely Girl 15 too. Jacob completely ignores the post made by Skylar and comments to Matthew “stay away from my girl.” Jacob becomes jealous and tries to stalk out which comment post could possibly be his friend Matthew. He replies to a number of comments telling other Youtube users to back off of his “girlfriend,” hoping to scare off every adoring commenter. . He even defends her against angry commenters who reply to her video post with comments such as, “Wtf is this?”

One day when Jacob checks into Lonely Girl 15’s page he comes across her latest addition to her VLOG. After watching the video Jacob begins to write an intimate comment replying to the video. Midway through the comment, however, Jacob notices a link posted in the comment area. Excited to see that Lonely Girl 15’s popularity has spread outside of the Youtube community and into the Los Angeles Times Jacob anxiously clicks on the link that held “lonely girl” in the url. Once Jacob reads the title of the article, “LonelyGirl15 Blog Is Brainchild of 3 Filmmakers,” Jacob moves the mouse towards the “x” button to exit out of the page but not before noticing that this was an article posted by a highly esteemed new source, which is the Los Angeles Times. He continues to read the article that divulges the truth of the popular web series. Nothing about his love is true and instead of laughing it off as a normal Youtube user would do he replies in a fit of rage. After all, he has invested most of his waking being over the past few months invested in a “relationship” with this girl. Feeling alone, and betrayed by the “truth” of the virtual landscape Jacob falls to his knees burying his head into his hands. He gets up and begins to write an angry post on the video he just watched. Halfway through however, he stops, closes the computer shakes his head and starts towards the door of his room. As he reaches for the door knob his hand begins to tremble. As hard as he tries to leave his room his uncertainty keeps him back. Over the past few months he has grown distant from his friends who didn’t believe in he and Lonely Girl 15’s relationship. Due to fear of the outside world he turns back to the only medium through which he understands how to make a connection even if it isn’t real. Play ends.

Script #3

*Please click on each link. You should watch the linked video before reading the comments on each page posted by “JacobLuvsYou15” who is the main character Jacob.

*The treatment is at the end of the script

*If for some reason you can’t find the comments posted by the above username they are posted below below each link.

1) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=DLqCM16i6QY&feature=channel_video_title

“Finally you have returned. As if your first videos didn't already leave me entranced I've grown to adore you even more after this post. Not only are you insanely funny but you are smart too!! Never shall I troll your page as I have on countless other threads. I love you!!”

2) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=zQEBobE9XZs&feature=channel_video_title

“@valkyrie034 that is not her boyfriend! Look

at them together... PuddingPie don't give into the peer pressure of your Vlog subscribers. You know you're not feeling this guy and I don't want him to get in the way of you and I. ;)”

3)http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=GnYgQJud2Vk&feature=mfu_in_order&list=UL

“See I told you all they aren’t together!! Don’t purs

ue him babe. He doesn’t matter and I know you don’t feel he matters. You’ve obviously read my post and now I see that you appreciate my support of your videos and what better way to show your love that through a video reply?? Way better than a text reply no doubt. This video is but the budding of our love. World of Warcraft can wait, because I’ll be spending eve

ry waking moment awaiting your next reply.”

4) Facebook of his friends making fun of him

5) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=50awC3DX9yI&feature=related

“@PetePro88 Matthew I swear if this is you I will tear out your spleen. DO NOT SCAM ON MY GIRL!”

6) http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=dZN-Wye4rDE

“@MrMushypeas123 WTF is this?!?! Who the fuck are you to question such a divine young woman?? The eloquence with which she helps the viewer understand her problems is admirable. A fifteen year old? A metaphor??

"I learned how to see the world from a completely different point of view when I was four so why is it so hard for them".....GOLDEN!

Please sir do us all a favor and get over your pretentious idiocracy so that you can realize her true talents”

7) Youtube Screenshot-Angered by Realization


8) Jacob chooses to bask in the fantasy (photo attached as Photo 8)


Saturday, May 14, 2011

Script #3: Listening

Theme: The connection assumedly shared amongst individuals in the digital world isn’t always necessarily a two way street.

Premise: JACOB is in love with LONELYGIRL15. He’s been following her videos every since her first post and has disillusioned himself, through Youtube video post, into believing they actually have a relationship. Despite Lonely Girl 15’s non-responsiveness, when it comes to the light that all of her video post where merely performance Jacob, feeling frustrated and betrayed, wigs out and from that incident never trust Youtube again.

Program: This story is set within the Internet world. Jacob does however sit alone in his room throughout the entire script, but what is of most importance is he interactions with Lonely Girl 15’s Youtube videos through his video comments. Youtube is home to many Internet sensations, including Lonely Girl 15, who doing her fifteen minutes of fame, had many followers. Despite the fact that she was playing a fifteen year old girl she attracted followers of all ages who were excited to tune in for her random antics of, “life.” Some followers admitted that they were deeply saddened after discovering that Lonely Girl 15 was merely an actress. This will be a story told through video comment post about a fictional character who falls in love with Lonely Girl 15 as well.

Treatment: Jacob is a twenty-five year old Internet geek who spends most of his time trolling threads and constantly looking for updates on when the next Lonely Girl 15 video is to be posted. Over the past few months Jacob feels he has built a relationship with Lonely Girl 15. Despite the fact that he too is a avid troller, he makes sure to report every trolling post. He even defends her against angry comments that refer to her show as, “disgusting,” or a, “waste of time.” In addition to his vocal replies to her every action in her videos he leaves long heartfelt messages after each episode is over and is sure that Lonely Girl 15, though she has never replied to any of his post, has read them. Jacob even misconstrues some of Lonely Girl 15’s videos as video replies to his commentary. He goes on with this for a few months. Jacob is heavily disappointed when he checks into her Youtube channel and sees that there is no repost. When she has added a new video Jacob drops everything he was doing, which in this instance is put his game of World of Warcraft on hold, to devout his full attention to his self-assumed girlfriend. Jacob grows more and more delusion. He tells his friends of their “relationship.” Most of his friends poke fun of his delusion, but another friend, Matthew, admits that he is in love with Lonely Girl 15 too. Jacob becomes jealous and tries to stalk out which comment post could possibly be his friend Matthew. He replies to a number of comments telling other Youtube users to back off of his “girlfriend,” hoping to scare off every adoring commenter.

One day when Jacob checks into Lonely Girl 15’s page he comes across her latest addition to her VLOG, which just so happens to be the video where Lonely Girl 15 admits that all of her previous videos has been a performance. This fact hurts Jacob. He is sad that she isn’t really Lonely Girl 15, but still attracted to her confidence in allowing the world into her room and midway through the video he begins typing a comment about how he doesn’t care that she was performing and hopes that soon they could meet so he could get to know the real here. Jacob does not get the hint until Lonely Girl 15 admits that there are producers and writers involved as well. At this instant he recognizes that the whole thing is a complete hoax. Nothing about his love is true and instead of laughing it off as a normal Youtube user would do he replies in a fit of rage, crying and tossing his computer to the ground as he shouts phrases like, “but I thought you loved me.”

The last scene one of Jacob’s friends leaves a message on Jacobs facebook page reading, “So how about that Lonely Girl 15?” He merely replies, “…Fuck Youtube,” and the play ends.

Monday, April 11, 2011

Script #1 Gathering

Theme: Disillusioning the façade of physical beauty leads to one’s recognition of their own true potential.

Premise: Kiah is an average looking yet accomplished college student visiting her parents during her winter break. She is the family prize, but no matter how many family members commend her good work she cares most about the opinion of her mother, Naomi, who although seemingly appreciates Kiah’s accomplishments really prizes physical beauty over all. The entire visit goes just as Kiah’s childhood with her mother judging her appearance and the appearance of those around her completely overlooking everything else Kiah is involved in from classes to social groups. The way Kiah was raised, with a mother who prizes beauty above all, has caused Kiah to believe herself that physical beauty is all that matters, and because she is not extremely beautiful she feels as if she is a failure. until the conversation of mother-daughter catch-up as they are getting ready for Christmas dinner where Kiah, who has now gained a new sensibility upon going away from college, stirs up different topics of conversation unlike the one’s Kiah and her mother would usually discuss. Her mother’s lack of ability to participate in the conversation but persistence with telling Kiah how to fix her hair and do her make-up sets something off in Kiah causing her to infuriatingly question her mother’s values which fosters into a great argument between the two engaging issues of beauty and self-image. In the end Kiah is able to see behind her mother’s pretty face where nothing lies but a woman with very low self-esteem and in this realization Kiah is able to see the beauty in her potential aside from the physical. She thinks she needs physical beauty up until these moments in the bedroom. but in the end she realizes that confidence serves her well.

Program: This story is set in present day Los Angeles, California a city critically acclaimed as a city of illusions where its inhabitants treasure designer jeans and sunglasses over mental capacity, intellect, and, if you can fake it well enough, one’s net worth. As long as you look rich you are rich. The actuality of your situation and your intellect hardly ever matters, because it is all about the image. It isn’t out of the ordinary for someone with no money to own a Mercedes and an Yves Saint Laurent bag. Because this is an overlying discourse of Los Angeles no one living within the system recognizes its ridiculousness hence many function within this construction including Kiah’s mother Naomi.


Treatment: Kiah has always been notably intelligent. Throughout her life she has earned countless awards and prizes for her academic success. However, Kiah is unable to recognize the worth of her accomplishments because she was raised primarily by her mother Naomi, who prizes physical beauty over all. Because Naomi, who only dresses in the styling’s of the latest hot designer, placed so much emphasis on physical beauty and never recognized any other accomplishment of Kiah’s she grew up believing that physical beauty equates to one’s worth causing Kiah to be extremely self-doubting despite all of her academic accomplishments. Though Kia propels herself through academic challenge she cannot overlook her not-so-attractive reflection to realize the worth of her accomplishments. When she comes back for winter vacation from her freshman year at UC Berkeley countless compliments are bestowed upon Kiah who is unable to fully appreciate them because all the while people are telling her how proud they are she’s experiencing mental torment from over the years thinking too much about how she can improve her average physical appearance which never seems to please her critical mother, Naomi.

One day during break Kiah, her mother, and her two little sisters go to the mall for Christmas shopping. While in one store one of Kiah’s little sister’s picks out a cute outfit and ask her mother to try it on. Once she tries it on and model’s the outfit for the rest of the family Naomi makes a comment to Kiah reminiscing over the days when Kiah used to be, “that cute.” The nostalgic way with which Naomi states the comment infers that she misses that daughter and although Naomi does not specifically state this the way she adoringly looks at her younger daughter provides all the information that Kiah and the audience needs to understand that Naomi is not really concerned with Kiah. Especially since right before Kiah is trying to describe to her mother a social group that she is involved in back at Berkeley and her mother merely brushes it off asking when was the last time she got her eyebrows arched. The rest of the day goes by similarly. Nothing Kiah tries on deserves a compliment from her mother. The little confidence that Kiah came home with has been shattered by her mother’s perception. She returns to being the timid young girl she was before leaving for college.

The setting fastwords a couple of days to Christmas evening on the inside of Naomi’s bedroom where her and her daughter are both getting ready for Christmas dinner. In this final scene it is revealed to the audience just how much Naomi treasures material over intellect when a Kiah tries to foster conversation aside from how she should do her make-up or hair. With every question and conversation started posed by Kiah and with every change of the subject by her mother Kiah slowly begins to realize that her mother is nothing more than what she wears and a pretty face. Enraged by her mother’s inability to hold conversation she begins to yell at her mother, which is completely out of character for Kiah. Although Kiah is very angry her outrage brings about a new sense of self where in calling out her mother she realizes just how ridiculously she was raised placing all worth in physical beauty. She walks out of the room checking the mirror before smiling to her reflection. She sits at the kitchen table making conversation. Her mother follows behind a little later, sits down, and ask Kiah how her classes are going. End scene.

Behavioral Composite:

1) 1) Kiah arrives back home still the timid girl she was before leaving for college. When she gets to her house the first thing she does is nervously check the mirror to make sure her appearance is good enough for her mother. Knowing that it is not, because it never is, she sighs before going downstairs to catch up with her family. While family members compliment her achievements she replies with a momentary forced smile because she herself doesn’t believe her accomplishments to be all that great. By the time the night is over she is unable to even fake a smile, because her very attractive, retail obsessed mother has taken away that smidget of confidence she possessed through comments about her weight gain and acne problem. When everyone leaves Kiah goes upstairs checking the mirror displeased with her reflection before going to sleep.

2) 2) The following day when Kiah, her mother Naomi and her two little sisters are going Christmas shopping Kiah finds its impossible to listen to anything her mother and sisters are saying because she is obsessively examining the physical appearance of every woman walking by. Because her self-esteem has been torn down by her beautiful mother every time she passes by another beautiful woman she sighs deeply and looks away. She does not want that person to see her, because she feels they will judge her just as her for not being as attractive just as her mother does. When they arrive in one store one of Kiah’s little sister’s, bright-eyed and peppy, ask her mother, Naomi if she could try on an outfit. When she models the outfit for them her mother reminiscences over how Kiah used to be, “that cute.” Although, Naomi has never blatantly stated to Kiah that her appearance is never good enough for her the nostalgic tone with which she speaks causes Kiah to look down at the floor as if she too was longing to be back in those days. It’s not as if Naomi is trying to hurt Kiah’s feelings it is more so that Naomi, who is not college-educated, cannot conceptualize anything of more importance than fashion and good-looks. While still in the store Kiah picks out several items to try on. Before leaving the dressing room she tediously looks over the outfit trying to make sure everything is perfect before going outside to show her mom. Before leaving she lets out a huge sigh because she knows that the only comments her mother is going to have will be about whether or not the clothes are designer and how it doesn’t really look good on her. She was right. Kia returns to the dressing room slowing taking off her clothes trying not to look at herself in the mirror because she does not like what she sees.

3) The time fast-forwards to Christmas evening inside of Naomi’s bedroom where Kiah and Naomi are getting ready for Christmas dinner. Kiah hates getting ready with her mother. She tries to do her make-up without her mother noticing but when she does Naomi comments that maybe she should put a little more on. Kiah tries to change the subject by telling her mother about some of the social clubs she’s involved in on campus. Naomi pretending to be interested replies in an air-headed peppy fashion with an “O ok!” as she continues to apply Kiah’s make-up. Kiah becomes speculative. It took going away for college and returning back home for Kiah to realize her mother’s superficiality. She tries to bring up conversations about her classes and make witty jokes about problems with the government and all Naomi does it blankly stare back nodding her head, in a way where Kiah knows that she does not know what she is talking about. With a tone lacking her usual shyness she begins to question her mother. When Naomi comments that beauty is what you need to be rich Kiah ask slightly infuriated, “Is that all you care about?” Naomi pauses for a few seconds, looking at Kiah confused, unsure of why she is asking her this question. A few moments later Naomi replies still blankly and utterly confused with a, “what?” Kiah then blows up. At this very moment she realizes that she has been encompassed by the façade of physical beauty. She begins to yell at her mother for raising her that way. Her mom still looks at her confused. Naomi does not see the error of her ways because the importance of fashion and physical beauty is all she knows. Kiah’s outrage proves to be a liberating act. Before leaving the room to go downstairs for dinner she checks the mirror and for the first time in years is able to smile at her reflection. She sits down at the dinner table exuding a newfound confidence fostered by the previous confrontation. After a few minutes Naomi comes to the dinner table still a little distraught. In her action and gesture the audience can see that she still doesn’t really understand what the explosion was all about, but when she ask Kiah to tell her more about her classes we can see that she’s making an effort to try to understand. End scene.